THE BIG RED POWER PEN EDITING SYSTEM: KILL THESE 24 WORDS
The fast, easy editing method that shows you step-by-step how to kill 24 common words and phrases that weaken your writing in fiction and memoir!
This fast, easy editing method shows you step-by-step how to kill 24 common words and phrases that weaken your writing in fiction and memoir!
With 286 examples of sentences from real first-draft manuscripts strengthened by THE BIG RED POWER PEN EDITING SYSTEM!
These examples will show you exactly how you can strengthen your writing in the next few hours using THE BIG RED POWER PEN EDITING SYSTEM!
– Easy to read, easy to understand, easy to apply to your writing now!
What’s so special about this book?
I’m Carolyn V. Hamilton and I help aspiring fiction and memoir writers like you create their best stuff. In my classes and coaching sessions I show writers specific ways they can strengthen their writing.
Now, I have nothing against our high-school English teachers. They gave you a strong writing foundation and—hopefully—instilled in you a love of reading and writing.
But the language of books today is fast and straightforward. You’re not writing a term paper here. We live in a binge-watching-Netflix world, where we want our entertainment fast and furious, if you’ll forgive me for capitalizing on the popular Vin Diesel movie series.
This means that a lot of little words used in written sentences DON’T REALLY HAVE TO BE THERE. Removing them speeds up the pacing for your reader, and makes YOU a stronger contemporary story-teller.
Wishing you happy, easy editing!