Our Managing Editor, Carolyn V. Hamilton, will read the first 20 pages your manuscript and critique it for you according to:
1) the power of your concept
2) how you can strengthen your sentences, and
3) a line edit (grammar & punctuation)
As an ADDED BONUS we will tell you the one thing most important (based on your work) that you want to do to take your story to the next level.
With just this much, you will learn things that you can apply yourself to the rest of your manuscript.